3 points | by petethomas 12 hours ago ago
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This story would be a lot more readable without the politics and cheap digs. A great writer can trust the reader to connect the dots themselves. A poor writer feels compelled to hit us in the face with the point they want to make.
This story would be a lot more readable without the politics and cheap digs. A great writer can trust the reader to connect the dots themselves. A poor writer feels compelled to hit us in the face with the point they want to make.